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31 July 2008 @ 12:06 am
X-Mas in July!  
Title: Let's Write a Letter To the Day After Tomorrow
For: [info]doctor_caduceus
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Sylar/Mohinder
Word Count: 590
Prompt: Tempest, glide, augury, psychopomp.
Notes: Beta'd by the lovely [info]daughtersofisis
Excerpt: Mohinder dreams of the future. Nuclear sands shifting over tumbled skyscrapers, flowing past jagged spires of glass – the world, empty and silent. Only the sun burns bright, a white disc in the sky.


Mohinder is dreaming. Synapse to synapse, neurons stringy and pleading, tiny little messages. Can you hear me now? Can you hear me?

Sylar hears.

Mohinder dreams of the future. Nuclear sands shifting over tumbled skyscrapers, flowing past jagged spires of glass – the world, empty and silent. Only the sun burns bright, a white disc in the sky.

Everyone can tell the future; Sylar knows this, his intuition gleaming sharp. Anyone can predict the next ice age, the next asteroid, the next atomic bomb with unerring accuracy, but this information, it locks itself in the depths of the brain, useless and repressed.

We use only 10% of our brain cells at any given time. What could we do if we used them all?

Mohinder's eyelids flicker, pulled taut from his roving gaze. Dreamscapes, truthscapes, reality and disconnect, he glides through his world like a ghost of the past. Here is a doll's head, eyes scratched, face sanded to a featureless plane; here, the iron remains of a skyscraper; there, the naked skeleton of the Statue of Liberty. Remnants of empires ancient, the rise and fall of the United States of America.

Sylar sees all this and more. He met a boy once, a boy with dark skin and curly hair and big, frightened eyes. His limbs were thin and his shirt was loose and in his head, he had the power of a shaman. His blood ran dripping from Sylar's fingers and painted destiny on the floor.

Mohinder stirs. The future troubles him; it's not what he expects. The sky throbs, green and clouded, and the sand surges at his legs. Stay stay stay, it hisses.

Sylar presses his hand to Mohinder's chest. Humans are weak, frail, made with nothing but molecules and atoms. Here is Mohinder's sternum, and here is his heart. Hiding behind its cage of bone, it beats weakly, a telegram in Morse. Can you hear me?

Sylar hears.

Mohinder is moaning, struggling to wake; he is drowning in sand, arms helpless against the sky which pushes him under. Deaf, dumb, blind – his eyes and ears and mouth are filled with dreams. Electricity racing, thousands and thousands of synapses asking, a hyperventilation of the mind. His heart, it screams.

New York will crumble, an avalanche of cement and steel turning to ash, to dust, shadow, nothing. Satellites will ricochet, moons will fall, and the sun, it will burn, ultraviolet and angry. The world will topple off its precarious axis and sigh in pain. Can you hear me now?

The whites of his eyes flash terror in the dark. Ripped from his dreamworld, his futureworld, he shudders awake and the connection, it. Stops.

All these futures, they just want to be heard.

Mohinder shivers, blood icy. His tongue rasps against his lips and his throat clicks dry in the silence. Sylar feigns sleepiness.

"Mohinder?" he slurs. "Is everything okay?"

The future still lingers, waits to be heard. Mohinder shakes his head. "Just a dream." His voice is hoarse, cracked. He turns into Sylar's arms and pulls the sheets up. By morning, he will have forgotten.

But Sylar knows, he hears, he listens to the cells and the ions between them. Teeth sharp, eyes dark, he will remember what the future said. What will he do with this knowledge? Only the sun knows, eternal and burning, white in the sky. Destiny drips from his fingers in the color of blood.

Everyone's a fortune teller. Everyone's an augur. What will you do with your future?

(Can you hear me now?)
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Grey Elven-Eyes: Heroes--Mylar (Merged)[info]greyelveneyes on July 31st, 2008 05:46 am (UTC)
WOW. I love this. I'm absolutely enamored with the surreal imagery in this, and just...wow.

Ripped from his dreamworld, his futureworld, he shudders awake and the connection, it. Stops.

The way that sentence ends? Love. I have such a weakness for that type of abruptness done right. ♥
Aye the Guy[info]technovanilla on July 31st, 2008 12:49 pm (UTC)
Wow, thank you so much! I was actually really unsure of that sentence since it felt a little amateurish to me. But thank you for your comment!
bonniesrg: pic#72993509[info]bonniesrg on July 31st, 2008 06:32 am (UTC)
This is so descriptive with the apocolyptic future. You feel your there. And Sylar watching over Momo awwwwwww
Aye the Guy[info]technovanilla on July 31st, 2008 12:49 pm (UTC)
Ahahah, Momo! Love. Thank you so much for your comment!
Shaitanah: sin[info]istne_pieklo on July 31st, 2008 07:27 am (UTC)
Wow! Amazing story! It creates such heavy and vibrant imagery, such a beautiful eerie atmosphere that it gives me chills to read it. I love every word of it! XD
Aye the Guy[info]technovanilla on July 31st, 2008 12:49 pm (UTC)
Yay, I'm glad! Thank you for reading!
Dr. Betty Caduceus: Bright[info]doctor_caduceus on July 31st, 2008 09:53 am (UTC)
I love this so freakin' much I can't actually form words. I'll come back with more intelligent thank yous later, but for now, gods, wow.
Aye the Guy[info]technovanilla on July 31st, 2008 12:50 pm (UTC)
Take as long as you like! *love* Happy Christmas, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
levitatethis[info]levitatethis on July 31st, 2008 11:12 am (UTC)
This has such an incredibly vividness to it, like we're tripping along through Mohinder's nightmarish future, hearing it along with Sylar. I really like the way you describe such a destroyed future and the difference in Mohinder's twisting and turning reaction to it versus Sylar's more contemplative one. It's not necessarily a disconnect between them (although that could be imagined) but almost a balancing act between them...Mohinder's emotions of fright and worry on one side and Sylar's more distanced and wondering take on it.

I like the open ending here and the knowledge that Sylar could go any way with this knowledge...that what Mohinder will forget come early morning Sylar will take onto his own shoulders.

Very cool premise.
Aye the Guy[info]technovanilla on July 31st, 2008 12:55 pm (UTC)
Waugh, thank you for noticing that. I've always been interested in writing the differences between Mohinder and Sylar. Thank you for your coment!
megmatthews20: Mohinder Destiny[info]megmatthews20 on August 1st, 2008 10:39 pm (UTC)
Vivid is right...wow, the flow of this is just amazing.

The description of Mohinder's dream state is really beautiful, really dark, really frightening, and I love it.

Lovely job!

cheers
Aye the Guy[info]technovanilla on August 2nd, 2008 02:31 am (UTC)
Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you liked it.
ladywilde80: Mylar [info]ladywilde80 on August 3rd, 2008 05:04 am (UTC)
Oh wow. What lovely imagery.

This fic was just, wow - a breath of fresh air. You're style is fascinating, like a Salvatore Dali painting in word form.

Gorgeous.
Aye the Guy[info]technovanilla on August 4th, 2008 02:58 pm (UTC)
Ahh, thank you so much! I love Salvadore Dali funtimes. Thanks for reading!
(Anonymous) on September 23rd, 2008 05:53 am (UTC)
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[info]chieffigiori on October 28th, 2009 01:52 am (UTC)
something like хостинг
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